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Twain Sky Spectral by RJAce1014 Twain Sky Spectral by RJAce1014
MINOR UPDATE
Some color change...


Please read the Description!!
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Happy Birthday ~Hokage3 :iconhokage3:

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This is my gift for him for his special birthday! I don't know much of his preferred OC among his OC but I guess everything is from his own Manga. I hope you like it! Pinoy RULEZ!

Time Elapsed: 4hrs and 29minutes
Tablet: Cintiq 12wx
Software: Paint Tool Sai and IllustStudio
Art Level: Lv80
Skill: Pacquiao FAN-PUNCH!

Excuse me po moments:
"I was in a party eating and getting drunk my friends show all of us a video of something funny in his IPad and I laugh out loud while drinking soda and burst it on the people on the next table.... *Psyche!*"

Lesson Learned: Never drink while laughing!

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:iconrai-knightshade:
Rai-Knightshade Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Way cool!
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WaruiJaNai Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
It is not letting me add a critique for some reason... so here is what I had to say...

I really like the concept, and I hope you don't get upset when I say that this is not your best work. I am pretty sure that you know that already though. I feel like you were getting frustrated with this piece, and you rushed the finishing of it. As always, you display excellent use of color and shadow. Your lighting effects are simply amazing, and I really love how you incorporated the mist sparkle. I don't really want to leave negative comments, or even really critique this piece, because I think we both know that you can, and have done, better. Mostly I see that you are asking for critiques, and you haven't gotten one yet.

I think that you could have taken more care with creating the rainbow, so that it either doesn't bend, and stays with a more natural arc, or have made it more like a ribbon, since I get the idea that the male character is basically "painting" the ribbon.

There are a lot of Anatomy flaws with this piece. His arms are too short, his hands too big, and her shoulders too wide. Since she is shorter than he, her hips should be further down on the page, unless she is jumping, and I think that there are a few too many ripples in the fabric on the shirt. It gives the effect of this top being very loose, when I think it should be a little more form fitting to show off her figure. His Shirt seems to dead end into his belt, and either he is sagging his pants, or there is no room for his genitalia in those jeans.

All that being said... I still like this piece, and I hope you don't take this critique personally. I do respect and appreciate you as an artist. I certainly feel that you have done better work, and look forward to seeing more of it.
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LordessSkadi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The colors are amazing!
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crowndolls Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
Ang Cute!^^
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:iconshimmeroflightning:
ShimmerOfLightning Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cute!!!
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Animexoartist101 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
sooo romantic.:]
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome....:iconkonatagoodjobplz:

you made a great artwork with such a short time,......*teach me your ways...

Lessons Learned: no Ipad when Partying....

And the image.....yep, my dA ID is always a paper version of myself...and I admit the guy is accurate to the real me..(^_^)..spot on....and...and....Yumi-chan!..her beside me....no wonder the background is so colorful.....good job, well done...*stares at Mayumi more....

Thanks for the artwork, it made my day..I hope I can do something like this for you in the future......
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:iconrjace1014:
RJAce1014 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Salamat (Tagalog na tayo xD)

Haha lol cause I use Cintiq on which makes it like drawing on paper since directly on screen (Kaya nga sabi nila mas mabilis sa papel xD)

Muahaha xD tama kasi laban ni Pacquiao, dapat sa TV lang xD

Yeah, I have no color ref but yep, that's how I describe you too from your ID to your Avatar xDD. If I only know your most fave OC xDD but right now I use Yumi-chan. I'm thinking of drawing more than her surrounding you in the picture but I want my gift on time so I rushed it xD

OMG! I'm so glad I made you happy after those tough times xDD Oh well my birthday is coming so you can.... haha jokes (Kaw naman oh xD) I usually animate for bday gift but rushing it to an artwork is much faster xDD

Paggaling ka sa stress at depression ah! xDD
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oo nga, kakapagod english...

Whaaaa, Cintiq!!!..magkano mo sya nakuha, at ano size..di man ako makabili nyan in the near future, pero gusto ko rin yang ma-experience...

Natalo pa si Pacquiao....malas birthday ko nun....saan ka nanood ng laban, PVP?

Well, you got the colors right. Yung kulay ng buhok ni Mayumi, ganyan pag walang defuse glow....medyo redish pink thingy...Wag kang mag-alala, all my OC's is my fave, but you chose Yumi, which fits best on the image....

Heh, ilang buwan nalang, Bday mo na....I want to surprise you, pero kung may request ka na gift...I'm all ears...

just recovered from a depression....but stress is part of my life heh....
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RJAce1014 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yeah, tama na english xDD

Hahaha eto watch mo kung paano ko gamitin, yung presyo nasa description. [link]

Siempre PVP, ayaw ng dad ko pumunta kami sa Las Vegas kasi noong dati pumunta kami mga 2 hours bago kami nakalabas at mas masaya kung family and panonood, besides, hindi pa ako pwedeng magdrive sa sa freeway papuntang Vegas, ayaw ni papa kasi maraming accident na teenager d2 sa freeway.

Haha, yeah siempre, tinugma ko para mas masaya xD

Haha alam mo naman ang main OC ko eh, yung Canasaya Duo haha pero kung idrawing mo sila kasama yung Fave OC, pwede kang magqualify as my StarMember, pag starmember ka na, we can animate your OC for our series haha pero ikaw kung gusto mo sumali sa rank family namin xD and probably preffer it as my bday gift too haha, anyways, alam ko busy ka kaya baka hindi pero, surprising me yoowee, can't wait talaga. Basta yung main OC ko yung Canasaya ayos lang xDD atsaka anytime, I'll probably make your next bday grand dre!

Naku, nabasa mo ba yung journal ko? Depress din ako kaso lang, masyado akong tanga na hindi ko ilabas ang sama ng loob ko sa sarili kaya ayan, na Highblood ako tapos nagkaroon ako ang hypertenstion stage 2. Ang blood read ko 180/115 at hindi normal kasi 19 palang ako, super taas na ng blood ko. Atsaka may chance na atakihin ako sa puso kaya hanggang ngayon, ingat parin ako xDD

Oh well, congrats naka recover kana, gagawan ulet kita ng gift para sa depression mo!! ^^ Ayus lang yun dre, I could draw you anytime I feel like I wanted too xD
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