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Dress-up Steps
*Underwear
*MiniDress
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Character from::
RJ Stories I
RJ Stories II
RJ Stories OVA
RJ Stories the Movie: Aono Special Bday
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~xRaveRaiZa333x Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Some Special Notes and Reminders:

I never did stared too long for this but I wanna point out some things you did forget, you don't have to change it though, but I just wanna clear things up myself.

1.) Please do not remove Iza's choker in her neck no matter what. It has to do something with the storyline. That thing acts as a power limiter and resistor and it doesn't have to be removed even though she is naked. Also take note that it is a choker it clings tight to her neck similar to :iconrainrainplz:'s. At the back, the choker was locked by a long chain extending at the same length of her hair. The end of the chain is a rose brooch similar to her birth seal. Please refer to her ref sheet to understand what I mean:[link]

2.) The teru teru bozu is actually a loose belt and doesn't cling on her waist, it should be more hanging in her waist line. It's not a big deal anyway.

3.) The birth seal: [link] and the arm band. :XD:
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Hi,

Before I begin with reference change, there's one thing I need you to know. Although your OC has it's own storyline, everything from the story should not halt any ranking members line of work inside the group's ground. Also OC must be a normal human and normal human being doesn't have powers but in your storyline she have. Your OC resembles as you and I don't believe that in real life, you have powers as matching the resembles. I forsure will change it if it bothers you as a reference but lets not get the storylines mixed up with the group affairs such as like for example, Iza hates cake but I had an event about cake and starmember must participate on it, I don't like part of the storyline hating cake applied inside an event in the group or other OC for another example, Iza hate this or that but I grouped her with this or that. That's just an example, I hope Iza doesn't hate cake though xD

I know you will be asking me... "But Canary and Risaya have powers and not from Earth..." Of course they do but inside the group they act like a normal being that bleed. They have powers including me in the storyline but inside the groups, all of those are hidden on users personal preferences.(If you didn't get this be curious and ask question or even in tagalog.)

1.) I would re-apply it like you mentioned. If you want even in bikinis to have her necklace resistor since this is reference but I supposed that it should haven't any relation to the storyline like for example, if she don't wear it, it's either she age quick or dies. She's normal human in StarMember Hall of Fame.
I would consider it however in your past artwork of her naked, she didn't have of those necklace. It seems like the story you're mentioning is newly made. Here are some examples >>>
[link] <<< She doesn't have restrictor meaning she's a normal human.
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I will put it in as consideration since I found it on your first submission meaning that one is lock in the registration and I cannot remove it even in naked parts if the user prefer too.

2.) Since it's a loose belt, you should've known that it can be shifted from areas as a loose belt. Tight belts are lock and loose belts can be changable. It's not a big deal I agree since the difference between loose belt and tight belt are far different. Tight belts locks on specific area while loose belt can be anywhere depending on the characters actions or define cloth movement. (Now I know it's a loose belt so it's not really something to change, it can be place anywhere but common found in her waste line for your personal preferences and not a common mistake since it's loose xD)

3.) Also, although I saw your new artwork of her with arm bands. I would consider the seal be applied since it's hidden inside the body and not common to be seen however, her bands will not be added since it's also based on your first submissions. I will make it as part of her accessories in registration but not the original form of the registration.

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Other art of yours that is arm bandless >>>[link]

Other who refers to the arm bandless Iza
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Remember our one policies of OC's clothing and one line in our terms and agreement that OC must not be alterable even slight new changes are made, we still based on your previous first art of her. We can consider it as an accessories but it won't be applied for the registered OC. You can use it on your personal preference of your OC but in the group grounds, she's arm bandless like on 2011 pictures. Accessories means can be or cannot be added in her normal registration, even if it is a human error, I ask everyone to take a look at everything they submitted since no changes will be made.

In conclusion,

I know you will probably think... "Jeez, kuya! It's not really a fuzz..." Nope, it's a fuzz to me. When I say permanent in terms and agreement, you agreed that you won't make add ons on your original submission even if it is a human mistake or so it's permanent. By agreeing on it, we can reject add-ons or consider it as an accesorries if an add on doesn't deflect OC backgrounds. Any addition is class as accesorries. I would add the Seal and the Necklace. Necklace is found on your first submission meaning we can put it even in bikini form, the seal is in interior of her clothes which is considered in bikini form but sudden addition of accesory such as arm band cannot be classified in her original form but acts like accessories. Hiding her hands in your first type of submission doesn't tell us details of arm bands existence meaning no arm band was shown to be part of it and it was logged inside the registration grounds. (It's our system)

So does this solved your problems? It will be updated soon after your response to this. Thank you!

- RJ
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~xRaveRaiZa333x Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IDEK.

The resistor makes her human that is the reason behind it. depending on you though I won't force you to add or remove it but i wish you would've have consider my place as well. I will not force the storyline to you as well, but as duly respect to the terms, other than that I won't argue
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The resistor and the seal is fine but the arm band is count as an accessories and not be part of the original. You never had the arm band before so it's considered accessories as for the resistors and seals, it sure is added. I don't really mind since they're in the submission. What I'm saying is that outside the group, you can use your own preference of your OC and I have nothing upon it. xDD Thank you if you understand it. I will add it now plus the seal. ^_^
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~xRaveRaiZa333x Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't have arguement in the armband either, just on the resistor part just make it cling in the neck instead of droping it, it's a choker not a necklace. I only add the armband at occasional times as well not all the time in that outfit tho, plus Iza is usually human in some parts of my storyline as well.
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haha you don't have to argue with it, it's on your submitted designs, besides all reference we get is what comes out that why we want members to design their OC like the last day of their life xD lol which is permanent. As for the resistor, sure we can add that but I'm just saying since you mentioned Iza has storylines, I don't like some of her storyline be a bother through events. I read that Iza have dislikes and likes but both should be applied even in events or Cameos or so just for the group. It's not like I disregard her storylines lol xD since my OC has different storylines though not all of them are from Earth except me O.O

haha, Done check it here again [link] or just reload the page lol

I added the seal and the Necklace but not the arm band. All refs here found are origin of the registration but for the group you can add teh arm band since I consider it as an accessory xD
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~xRaveRaiZa333x Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
don't worry it will not be a bother. just keep in mind the traits, personalities, likes dislikes and some of the bio. (and don't worry she likes cake that's why she's a bit chub, esp strawberries)

you can disregard the presence of the over protective, over exaggerated male harem if you want to as well.:XD:
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lol xD I don't think she's chub compare to me xD

Lol haha also Choker is a necklace and part of the necklace family use mostly by gothic styled people, a close fitted necklace. I have gothic and imo friends here in US and they are lots of them here lol.

Haha, it's up to you about that since it's still your OC after all with some bound registration restrictions.
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!izthrix139 Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrainrainplz::iconsaysplz: :iconultraangryplz: How dare you draw Iza like that!!! REMOVE!!!

:icondtrixdtrixplz::iconsaysplz: :iconfacepalmplz: Oh devil, what kind of biological weapon did you made out of her?

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Too bad, three of you haven't seen her naked but I did muahaha lolz
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